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Post by Eyes of Crimson on Oct 14, 2003 18:16:14 GMT -5
Nah, you're not stupid MarySues are just OCs (original characters) who are TOO perfect. They're beautiful, the author reminds you thousands of times how beautiful they are, they're strong, but they need an established character (most likely a bishi) to protect them, they have special powers, etc etc. Sorry I'm no good at explaining ^^;
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Post by Baka Pixie ^-^ *Kumiko* on Oct 15, 2003 13:02:51 GMT -5
hmmm.. woops... i wrote a mary sue... lol.. it was somethign stupid i wrote when i was 11, and she looked like what i wanted to look like, and she forced the G-boys to sleep with her... *ears burn* lol.... i'm now goign to delete my shame. ;D
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Post by Eyes of Crimson on Oct 15, 2003 18:15:00 GMT -5
11?! I'm 15 already and I'm still staying farrrr away from that.... stuff. ^^;
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Post by Baka Pixie ^-^ *Kumiko* on Oct 16, 2003 13:08:54 GMT -5
lol.. i was writing yaoi at age 11 ^-^!!! hm... the character was 15 though. not 11. the G-Boys sleeping with an 11 yr old? ugh! *needs to go scrub her brain*
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Post by lunatic on Oct 18, 2003 0:48:21 GMT -5
Yomi-san got great links about Mary Sue (self insert) in her site. Should check that out... And writing Mary Sue is not that bad, but a yaoi Mary Sue could be pretty much disturbing... Not suppose to know about Yaoi when you're eleven. But then again internet got no limit, I can't blame you..
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azile
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Post by azile on Oct 18, 2003 4:48:40 GMT -5
noooooo...read the latest chapter to Definition and it is not a happy chapter at all!!!! i think everyone needs to write a mary sue to get it out of their system, but i hope that they don't publish it on the net. the qualification to that would be unless their mary sue story has very good english and well planned and plotted. a piece of literature with poor characters is still not a good story, but better than a script fic none the less. to silent angel - i hope there are no hard feelings for the review that i gave your story that you linked up. it's just that from your honest description of the fic alone you could tell it was a mary sue. try going to yomi's links section or just surf the net yourself. there are plenty of sites on how to make good characters. azzy
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Post by Eyes of Crimson on Oct 18, 2003 14:15:32 GMT -5
Oh - thank you so much for reminding me, Azile-san!! ^_^ I totally forgot to read that story ^^;; *whacks herself* I'll get to it right away as soon as I finish my homework (<-- yeah - I'm still not done my homework )
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Yomi
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Post by Yomi on Oct 22, 2003 0:24:57 GMT -5
;D Thanks for supporting my fic masami! After many trials (plagiarism incident) and tribulations (people seem to like it!), the fic is well under way. Anyway - for those who want to see the end product after the accumulation of fruitful discussion: www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1525626Take care all! Yomi
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Post by Eyes of Crimson on Oct 22, 2003 18:27:51 GMT -5
No problem X3 I'll definitely support you all the way, Yomi-san!! ^____________________^ It's a great fic X3
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Yomi
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Post by Yomi on Oct 22, 2003 22:13:32 GMT -5
;D *cyber hug* ;D
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Post by Eyes of Crimson on Oct 23, 2003 15:20:59 GMT -5
*glomps Yomi-san* The truth is, that (lol) I didn't understand some of the words you used in the fic, because of my limited vocabulary ^^; But still it was well written ^.^ It won't be surprising if your stories are published one day.... ;D
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Yomi
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Post by Yomi on Oct 23, 2003 20:39:47 GMT -5
Don't know my words?!?! Why, you don't even need to pull out the dusty ol dictionary. ff.net has the function where you highlight the word and hit 'd' and the dictionary definition of the word will pop up. Convenient isn't it? Yomi
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Post by Eyes of Crimson on Oct 24, 2003 18:24:30 GMT -5
Lol I didn't know FFnet has that many functions I'll do that next time ^.^ The online dictionary sounds good XD
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Yumiko
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Post by Yumiko on Oct 24, 2003 21:12:30 GMT -5
bwahahaha I was reading my WORST mary-sue fic ever awhile ago ^^:; I was just cacking myself laughing when I read the shameful piece of crap...but I'm gonna keep it on ff.net just to remind me what I did at the start of this year ^^;; April of 2003 and not to do the same mistakes again -______- ... well I hope I don't. It's amazing how I looked back at that time when I wrote that fic...I thought it was great ^^;; but how WRONG I was...how wrong. Very shocked that nobody flamed it and I recently just got two non-flame reviews ^^;; I'm trying to read your fic Yomi >< but ff.net is stuffing up on me!!! Grrrrrr
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Post by Eyes of Crimson on Oct 25, 2003 9:10:07 GMT -5
Yeah FFnet's been a jerk >< It kept cutting off my reviews!! How long do they think it took me to type long messages? T_T *sighs* Note to self: Never use '<' or '>' in reviews.... ><
Yumi, you're talking about Chocolate Balls and Strawberry Lollies, right? I was new to FFnet and I think that's one of the first fics I liked ^.^ It wasn't bad, imho =P
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