MiniSweety
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Harry & Ron are sick of taking Shit from The Person and The Man, n Ron sorta likes Real Hermione..:$
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Post by MiniSweety on May 18, 2003 10:20:39 GMT -5
Well, I dun go to book stores bunch either, the only author I like (well, more like obsessed over) in real life as in a REAL book is Christopher Pike... ever heard of him?? He writes the best stories!! I'm serious!
As for LWL's cherry, my love, it's possible she got her inspirations there... lol but the story is VERY well written......
a few things I love about her:
She updates very often so you don't have to wait a year for the next chappie. (Like what ChanChan and Mosasi does)
Her chappies are very long which means there's a lot to read about... (Unless some authors who writes what? 500 words and have nothing happening?)
Her plots are good, they make sense... (One person I read, ok, this is what happened, Sakura runs away crying becoz she says she can't accept Syaoran's love coz she was heart broken by Yukito. Syaoran runs after her and says, I'll never hurt you. Simple as that and then she start acting like they've been going out for ever...)
She uses interesting words, she has good descriptions....
Her ficcies can be really sad sometimes.... (If you read ChanChan and Mosasi's ficcy Melody in My Heart? I read it like over 20 time {I swear, not over exaggerating} and i was still crying... lolz)
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Post by mysfaer on May 18, 2003 11:24:04 GMT -5
Hi Sweety-chan! To each our own I guess! ;D It's just a constructive review/observation as well as my own opinion on the fic. And I did say LWL is a promising fanfic writer! There's always room for improvement for everyone, ne?
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MiniSweety
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Harry & Ron are sick of taking Shit from The Person and The Man, n Ron sorta likes Real Hermione..:$
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Post by MiniSweety on May 18, 2003 12:05:34 GMT -5
yep:) Nobody's perfect eh?? lolz But I really hate authors who give cliffhangers.. And authors who say like.... FOR EXAMPLE: If I don't get at least 10 reviews I won't update..... That's like a threat of getting more review ya know... I find that really unfair becoz if the story is really bad, then how can u force people to review??
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Post by M-Chan on May 18, 2003 14:36:37 GMT -5
yea i hate those authors who threaten you like that but i usually write cliffhangers.... though i don't tend to it jus happens XD
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Post by mysfaer on May 18, 2003 20:05:02 GMT -5
I know what you mean about those kind of authors, they're making fanfic writing look like some kind of twisted competition, which shouldn't be! I don't necessarily hate those kind of authors (but I do dislike those attitudes, not necessarily the person)....and I get even more critical to them if their works are okay but to those who have erm...so-so "styles", I just don't read them. I don't like giving flames, besides, we're not supposed to flame in a review. ;D
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Post by M-Chan on May 18, 2003 20:19:48 GMT -5
i don't usually flame people... but i don't mind getting flames... but if they have a reason for flaming me... if its jus like you suck or something that makes me mad...
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MiniSweety
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Harry & Ron are sick of taking Shit from The Person and The Man, n Ron sorta likes Real Hermione..:$
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Post by MiniSweety on May 18, 2003 20:52:16 GMT -5
You should've seen, once I wrote in this review, I told the person that maybe things should happen slower that it's impossible for Sakura to be burst out crying one minute and Syaoran says :I wont' hurt you, and she stops crying and kisses him... i said she should work on that part into more details.. and guess what she did?? She logged off and as an annoymous she went to my story and wrote:You're saying my friend story is not good, well guess what? You're story SUCK!! and YOU suck!!You had any idea how shocked and mad I was?? I neva say ANYTHING bad.. only good... but I just said that trying 2 help her make the story betta and she takes it offendly and start having revenge!!! I didn't even mean it in a bad way... and I dun like making enemies.... She's just such a 'revenge girl'....
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Post by M-Chan on May 18, 2003 22:11:08 GMT -5
man... it was jus constructive critism... whats her problem? the reason why i joined ff.net was to get input on my writing... what i need to improve on and stuff... if people are jus going on to get popularity then thats jus sad... jus forget about that girl... its only once in awhile you find someone like that.
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Fibby
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"In this world, we stand on the roof of hell, gazing at flowers."
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Post by Fibby on May 19, 2003 4:00:10 GMT -5
i know what you guys mean. those kind of authors really do annoy me (well, okay... not really coz i never encountered a story that really had me hooked...) but hey, i'm not pretentious. i did that once. for the prologue of "Shipwrecked!" --- but only because i didn't want to bother writing it if no one found it interesting enough in the first place. know what i mean? i feel it would be a waste of space in ffnet (and i hate waste. ) as for the rest of the chappies, i simply let the reviews come on their own. wo-ohkay, that was off topic... sorry about that.
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Post by mysfaer on May 19, 2003 10:53:42 GMT -5
>>>>She logged off and as an annoymous she went to my story and wrote: You're saying my friend story is not good, well guess what? You're story SUCK!! and YOU suck!! You had any idea how shocked and mad I was?? I neva say ANYTHING bad.. only good... but I just said that trying 2 help her make the story betta and she takes it offendly and start having revenge!!!
I could understand that...someone did that to me too but I always tell them off and I don't think they're clever enough to even think of a reply. Why? Coz' we're in the right position. Heheh. (Big meanine Mysfaer! *whine*) That was back then. Now, I think I'll just ignore them or give them a piece of my mind. ^_^
That's why whenever I encounter such kind of stories, I just click out of that fic. Sometimes, people are just too...sensitive about the smallest of things. So I'd rather keep out of it and wait for them to grow up.
>>>>>man... it was jus constructive critism... whats her problem? the reason why i joined ff.net was to get input on my writing... what i need to improve on and stuff... if people are jus going on to get popularity then thats jus sad
True true. FF.net's vision just went down the drain. ^^
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MiniSweety
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Harry & Ron are sick of taking Shit from The Person and The Man, n Ron sorta likes Real Hermione..:$
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Post by MiniSweety on May 19, 2003 14:23:54 GMT -5
I agree with you guys completely.... ff.net is for you to express your imaginations and have fun plus practicing ur writing skills... some people changes it into like a 'writing war' where the only thing important is getting reviews..... that's kinda sad duncha think?? teehee... that's why I like LWL... she doesn't even read the review... (well hardly ever) she just writes for fun I mean reviews are nice 2 get but they shouldn't take it as a war or anything like that I mean it destroys the whole purpose of ff.net eh??
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Post by M-Chan on May 19, 2003 15:57:27 GMT -5
mysfaer next time you could use quote on the very right corner of the post... but it doesn't matter whatever you want to do ^^
really? i thought that lwl does read her reviews... but then again thats a lot to read lol... i usually read my reviews to look for constructive critism that i can use... but then encouragement is always appreciated.. who wouldn't? LOL...
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MiniSweety
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Harry & Ron are sick of taking Shit from The Person and The Man, n Ron sorta likes Real Hermione..:$
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Post by MiniSweety on May 19, 2003 19:06:58 GMT -5
ur absolutely right, I mean who wouldn't want to make their story better eh?? and LWL USED to read her reviews... but now not ALL the time coz sometimes in her author's notes, she writes something like this: I'm sry if I didn't say to much 'bout ur review >.< That's because I didnt get the chance to read it.... Oh yah, what I said about ChanChan and Mosasi's ficcy as good as LWL's??? Well, lets just say, not n e more.. she finally updated on Melody in My Heart, and guess what?? For some reason since about 5 months ago, all her update new chapter has........ well let's just say, making people believe in god!! I swear, that's all her story is about!! I mean it's suppose to be about magic, but what's she's doin is making the character STOP believing in magic and start believing in 'God'.... I mean this is a fic!!! USe ur imagination not talk about Jesus and salvation all day!! I mean I believe all that but I dun wanna read it in a ficcy!!!
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Post by M-Chan on May 19, 2003 19:24:42 GMT -5
i think you should tell her...
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