ermm... fungiwoman's fanfics...

[M-Chan]

well i was wondering if anyone out there could read my fics... and maybe review them.. but give me useful reviews that i could improve upon... you don't have to read all of them just read whatever you want ^^

Tainted Destiny (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=998530) - CCS
Syaoran, a cold hearted, unloving but handsome guy and Sakura a sad lonely girl, who masks a happy face. It's up to two fates, to show two unfound lovers to each other. Finished.

Cry No More (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1037334) -CCS
After Syaoran disappears in a battle, and is presumed dead, Sakura spends many years grieving for his death. Then she finally moves on with Eriol, but what happens if Syaoran comes back?

If You Only Knew (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=941302) -CCS
Something or someone is after Sakura, she changes her identity and moves to Hong Kong. No one knows who she really is, including Syaoran. Everyone thinks she's dead. Syaoran hates the new Sakura, though not knowing it is really her. Finished.

Moonlit Candles (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1223512) -CCS
She thought she had married the perfect man, except he turns out to be a dangerous violent monster. What happens when she falls in the arms of Li Syaoran?

Unshed Tears (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1143327) -Final Fantasy VII
Cloud has finished his self journey, finally returning to reality and facing those he left. He returns to Tifa, sparks do fly, but what happens when Aeris is revived and returns? Who will Cloud choose?

Pieces Of Life (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1278896) - Weiss Kreuz
What happens when a female is added to the Weiss group? She turns all the heads of the guys, but who is she... really?

aww just putting the summaries up made me realize how bad the summaries actually were! bah... anyways.. there... hope that made it easier oh yea thanks to whoever reads them!

[Kazeshi]

I'm gonna read them soon, i'm putting it in my scrapbook so i can read it later, due to my storage of going on the internet. Nice stories by the way!

[darkarcher]

I love your stories too myrnie, well if you update soon or something, please e-mail me cuz then I can read it. bye bye for now

[M-Chan]

hehe i finished tainted destiny... and read my new weiss ficcie okie dok?

[M-Chan]

THERE made summaries for all my ficcies! now maybe its easier to choose which ones you would actually read XD

[Fibby]

i'll find time to read them. ;D
if only my CCS flair is back... *sigh*

[M-Chan]

no problem.. i'm trying to get my ccs flair back too

[Eyes of Crimson]

I'll go read!!!! I haven't read much CCS ficcies, but I'm sure your fics are good ^^ now if only I could get the exams out of my way.... *sweatdrops* maybe after exams then I'm sure I'll have time!

[M-Chan]

aww thanks for reading it at least ^^ take your time.. since i haven't read much of anyone's yet..

[Fibby]

i read 'cry no more.' hehe... i'm not a fan of long chapters...

so, how would you like me to review? extremely nice or extremely critical? maybe somewhere in between? do you want me to be specific or general (commenting on the fic as a whole)?

;D

[Eyes of Crimson]

yay.... I finally finished that stupid report! well, almost so I can go back to reading! I think I'll have some time to read some of your stories tonight, and I'll submit reviews ^-^ and you know, I've read the first chap of 'cry no more' and it was really good! ganbatte ne~

[M-Chan]

Fibby said:

i read 'cry no more.' hehe... i'm not a fan of long chapters...

so, how would you like me to review? extremely nice or extremely critical? maybe somewhere in between? do you want me to be specific or general (commenting on the fic as a whole)?

;D

extra critical would be good... ^^ but be specific.. XD those chapters ARE LONG? lol they're short.. so many people keep complaining about the length

ahh i hope you like the rest of it masami

[Fibby]

no, it's not like that. i meant, i decided to read 'cry no more' because it only has 9 chapters. ^^;

okay, i'll be critical... and specific. ^^ wait for my review, but i doubt that i'll be able to review just yet. i'll read your fic again so i can be specific. ^^

[M-Chan]

LOL.. okay ^^...

[Fibby]

yay! i just reviewed your fic! ^_^ tell me if you got it, k? coz when i checked it in my review history, i couldn't see it. and i was logged in too! >.<;

in case you didn't, it goes something like this:


i know i promised to be specific but... -_-; too lazy.
i like the idea. ^^ it's rather ... unsettling though. you must know, i LOATHE eriol ever since i set my eyes on him. (i'm a syaoran fan all the way through. ;p)
okay, back to the fic.
please don't hate me. ;_; but you did ask me to be critical...
technical stuff first.
there are a lot of typo errors! and there are a couple of awkward phrases and sentences, too. if you find time to revise, it's advisable that you correct them. it kinda ruins the flow of the story. it's important for the flow to be smooth so that the readers will... well... read. ^^; in fairness, your way of narrating is pretty good, but it can still be improved.
my impression on the characters. this opinion is a little biased. Sakura seem so fickle in your fic. one minute, she likes Eriol; the next, she turns back to Syao-chan. i don't know. she irritates me so much!
there's darkness and drama, but not too much. and the fact that sakura moved on is realistic, which is good. and since tomoyo's loyalty to sakura falters bcoz of her emotions for eriol, it makes me sympathize with her. i like the portrayal. ^^
now, the plot. it's something really commendable! it's interesting, and i like the drama involved (but... poor syao-chan... *cries*)

good job on this fic and keep going, k?